It is said that people should perceive transition of
weather considering in
reasons and effects. Firstly, the cause of various appearance of weather is
rising temperatures. Secondly, the reason of liquefying ice and large
mass of ice cause of higher sea level. Lastly, happiness and welfare are
resulted by climatic change(Congondis. 2011 :1-5).
Reference:
Congondis,D. (2011). Fact about Climate change. [
Online]. Available:
[ 2011, August
28].
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